Really powerful line! It'd be great to use as a prompt for a longer piece. I might even pare it down to just "His secret dream flashed across his face" for mystery, and to leave more to the reader's imagination. This is definitely a line that would make a reader stop to think about!
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Really powerful line! It'd be great to use as a prompt for a longer piece. I might even pare it down to just "His secret dream flashed across his face" for mystery, and to leave more to the reader's imagination. This is definitely a line that would make a reader stop to think about!
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