Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Clarification

Is this like Tabia's style? I sure hope so. I tried, anyway.

Let's make things clear:

This heart is mine.

Now put it down and get out.

9 comments:

Mike Carrozza said...

Approval.

Emlyn said...

BEST! I think this captured/emulated Tabia's style very well. Though I could also hear Jess. I love this piece regardless. Excellent! Especially since it's quite differnet from your own style.Even the title reminds me of Tabs, I could see her writing something like this. Well done!

tabs said...

I agree, I think it could go for Me, Mike and Jess. Maybe we've all got similar styles?
Well done, I luffs the title :D

Emlyn said...

I have to say I don't think it could go for Mike, I can't see him or hear him writing or saying something like this.

Mike Carrozza said...

I have to admit, I saw both Tabia and I in this. Honestly. I have a lot of short stuff in my books and some on my blog, but this feels like Tabia. But we're pretty much the same person anyway...right..

Jessica said...

100% Tabia, but, yeah, I got some Mike in there, too.

It's excellent. I approve. :]

Andrea said...

This sounds like Tabia but with less heartbroken uncertainty and with more assertion (which in no way is an offense to you Tabia! <3). Maybe because of the declarative sentences.

Davina Guttman said...

I too approve.
Well done, quite splendid.

Marta said...

AHAH oh man definitely Tabia on one of her depressed-but-more-angry-and-bitter-than-just-depressed days! :D I could see this on her blog.