Singing secret songs,
dancing down dark
roads running racing
wet wild wonderful
evenings enjoying each-other,
messy mornings melt-into
weeks without work
desperate desire drinking
lust, love, leaving
left lady, last
night, not nice
can't cry, cursing,
raging restlessly repeating
over over over.
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2 comments:
I like the alliterations. Very well done.
Thanks Francis!
I thought some lines maybe could have (better?) other words, but then the story changes...
(ex. instead of "left lady, last night, not nice" it could be "left lady, last night, nothing new")
I'm glad you liked it; and thanks for commenting :)
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