Sunday, October 4, 2009

I Looked Crazy Downtown Tonight

Two words carry their weight
During a night of regrets about regrets
About regrets.
Heart
Broken
Mended
Stepped on and
Wrenched

2 comments:

Chasch said...

I feel bad because no one commented on this and it deserved to be.

You only look crazy in the eyes of others.
The double regrets is very clever, the narrator of this poem has created a web of emotional complications. Wrenching of the heart may be the only way to extricate himself from his angst.

*hug*

tabs said...

*hug*