simple elegant, too short for me to criticize, I suck at poetry
I feel like this is a comment on life and death and its inevitability.I liked this alot.
It's short, so it should be very effective, and it achieves that to a certain point--but I can't help but feel it should be more subtle! "Nature--denatured" is a bit harsh for my mind, I believe.
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simple elegant, too short for me to criticize, I suck at poetry
I feel like this is a comment on life and death and its inevitability.
I liked this alot.
It's short, so it should be very effective, and it achieves that to a certain point--but I can't help but feel it should be more subtle! "Nature--denatured" is a bit harsh for my mind, I believe.
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